Artfully simple and sad. I'm sure this poem evokes a vivid memory for everyone who reads it-- mine is on a park bench on 11th and Pine in Philadelphia. I love "the loneliest times in my day are spent with you" and "the we we used to be" especially. You're off to a beautiful start. Happy NaPoWriMo!
Artfully simple and sad. I'm sure this poem evokes a vivid memory for everyone who reads it-- mine is on a park bench on 11th and Pine in Philadelphia. I love "the loneliest times in my day are spent with you" and "the we we used to be" especially. You're off to a beautiful start. Happy NaPoWriMo!
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